Tuesday, 18 March 2014

15 Minute Writes

 My Aunty Shirley
Her hair is as beautiful as a rose and her eyes are as brown as the bark of a weeping willow. She is as freckled as a Dalmatian. Her touch is so gentle I hug her every time she touches me. Although she’s not my mum she’s the next best thing… my Aunty Shirley!
By: Jodi

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jodi,
    Amazing story. It sounds like your aunty is really nice and pretty. I hope that I could meet her one day. Is there any other members in your family you feel the same way about?
    From Melody and Aisha.

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  2. Hi Jodi,
    the things that you wrote were very desriptive! We liked the part "her eyes are as brown as the weeping willow. Our Aunty gives gentle hugs also.What made you write this?
    by kita and jasmine.

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